【我写了一篇英语作文,帮我修改一下好吗?非常感谢!AnInterestingActivityOnaSundaymorning,IwesttotheShanghaiZoowithmyfriend.JackBothheandIwerehappyandexcited.ThereweresomanyanimalsintheZoo.Suddenly,】
我写了一篇英语作文,帮我修改一下好吗?非常感谢!
AnInterestingActivity
OnaSundaymorning,IwesttotheShanghaiZoowithmyfriend.JackBothheandIwerehappyandexcited.ThereweresomanyanimalsintheZoo.Suddenly,wesawabirdlyingontheground.Itwasinjured.Wetriedourbesttoruntothezoo'soffice.Themanagerpraisedus.Bothofusfeltproud.Therefore,Ithoughtitwasaninterestingactivityinmylife.