帮我看看有没有语病!有的话指出来,马上要!能帮我提点意见也行,感激不尽啊!好的话我加分,MypetMypetisalovelycat.Ilikeitverymuch.It'sverybeautiful.Lovelycatwithtwosmallears,looksliketiangle.Itwithtwo

　　帮我看看有没有语病!有的话指出来,马上要!能帮我提点意见也行,感激不尽啊!好的话我加分,

　　Mypet

　　Mypetisalovelycat.Ilikeitverymuch.It'sverybeautiful.

　　Lovelycatwithtwosmallears,looksliketiangle.Itwithtwobiueeyes.Intheevening,willshine.Ithasmanywhitefeather.It;stailislongandthin.

　　Italways"MiaoMiao",looksverycute.Mysisterlikesitverymuch,sosisteralwaysplaywithit.

　　Oh.fergottotellyou.mypetnameisfeifei.