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  【这篇托福作文能得几分?DistanceLearningOrClassroomLearningAsthedevelopmentofcomputertechnology,notonlycanwelearncoursesintheclassroom,butalsowecanlearnfromtheinternet.Astowhetherlearningonlineorlearningin】

  这篇托福作文能得几分?DistanceLearningOrClassroomLearningAsthedevelopmentofcomputertechnology,notonlycanwelearncoursesintheclassroom,butalsowecanlearnfromtheinternet.Astowhetherlearningonlineorlearningintheclassroom,inmyopinion,Iprefertolearningintheclassroom.Firstofall,notwithstandingtheinternetlearningdevelopsquickly,Ithinklearningintheclassismoresuitableandbetterforstudents,fortheinternetlearninghasn'tbeenwidelyusedanditsmodeisnotsomature.Asisknowntousall,mostofthestudentsstudyinginclassrooms,teachershavemoreexperiencesinclassroom-teachingthanthatoninternet.Therefore,thequalityofreceivingeducationinclassroomisbetterthanonlinelearning.Next,whenstudentsareinaclassroom,theycanchangeideasandcommunicatewithotherstudentsandteachers,butthisdoesn'texistinonlinelearning.Thecommunicationabilityisreallyanimportantpartofstudents'development.Whilestudentsareacquiringknowledgeofdifferentsubjects,communicatingwithotherscanimproveyourEQandtheabilitytodealwithrelationshipbetweenpersonandperson.Lateron,ifstudentsarelearninginaclassroom,itwillbeeasierfortheteacherstotakechargeoftheclassandusethediscipline.Butintheonlinelearning,studentscan'tbeseenbytheonlineteachers.Andtheeffectandefficiencyofaclasscan'tbeguaranteed.Teachersalsodon'tknowwhattheirstudentsaredoing.Onceyouareinaclassroom,withthechargeoftheteacher,everybodyisconcentratingontheblackboard,andyouhavetofollowthestudentsevenyouwanttodosomethingelse.Ifyoudon'tfollowtherules,youwillbepunished.Andanotheradvantageoflearninginclassroomisthatteacherscanusedifferentstrategiesfordifferentstudentsaccordingtostudents'circumstances.Atlast,Iwanttosaythatbothlearningonlineandlearninginaclassroomhavetheiradvantagesanddrawbacks.Butconcerningitinaprovidentwayandthinktheissuedeeply,Imayconcludethattheadvantagesoflearninginaclassroomoutweighmorethanlearningonline.Althoughthischoiceiskindofconservative,theotheristooradicalforstudents,fortherearen'tsomanytrialsononlinelearning.

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2020-09-22 08:44
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李国民

  1楼你就瞎说吧,误导别人有意思么?2楼你肯定没认真看1.notonlybutalso你主语用重复了2.Prefertodo不是doing你这属于硬伤3thinklearningintheclassismoresuitableandbetterforstudents,think后面不可以直接跟完整句子,要有that引导后面不太必要看了,同学,我想劝你一下,不爱听就算了,你的文章太多的东西不是你能掌握的,短语和句式能看出你严重模仿不成功的痕迹。而且你组织的长句很多不符合英语规则。托福要的是acceptablewrittenenglish一味追求自己不会的东西是不行的,建议你多用简单一些的句式用你真正掌握的短语这篇文章错误太多,得不了高分的,最多22,应该在20左右对不起,我是为你好,这么说希望你不要介意。如果你想知道问题所在,如何提高可以HI我

2020-09-22 08:47:24

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