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　　请哪位老师帮忙改改英语作文,指出错误指出,

　　DearHenry,

　　I’mgladtoreceiveyouletter.It’sapleasureformmetotellyoumyplanofthiscomingsummervacationafterthecollegeentranceexamination.Firstofall,agoodrestisneededbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse,I’lldomorereadingforfunandforknowledgeaswell.I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.They’vedonesomuchforme,youknow.Ifpossible,I’lltakepartinsomesocialarteritissothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.

　　Bestwishes!

　　LiHua.