雅思作文批改,第一次写啊…麻烦高手点评…谢谢~有人认为政府应该控制暴力电影以减少社会上逐渐增高的暴力犯罪案件.Doyouagreeordisagree?Somepeopleholdtheviewthatviolenceinfilmsisoneoftherea

　　雅思作文批改,第一次写啊…麻烦高手点评…谢谢~

　　有人认为政府应该控制暴力电影以减少社会上逐渐增高的暴力犯罪案件.Doyouagreeordisagree?

　　Somepeopleholdtheviewthatviolenceinfilmsisoneofthereasonsthatleadtoviolentcrimessogovernmentshouldkeepitundercontrol.I’mstandingfirmlyontheirsidebythreereasons.

　　Tobeginwith,thedramaticendingsinviolentfilmswillwakeuptheevilmindsinsomepeoplesincethetoughguysinthemoviesmayluckilyescapebeingpunishedorevenbecomeheroes.Thosewhohaven’tformasenseofrightandwrongandcan’ttelldramafromrealitywillprobablybemisleadedtoaguiltyroad.

　　Dramaticendingsareonlycreatingevilideasinsomepeople’sminds,butthetricksinviolentfilmsareteachingthosepeoplehowtoperformaclevercrime.Toattractalargeaudienceandsellingmoretickets,thefilmwriterswilltryallmeanstocreatenewwittytricks.Oncethepotentialcriminalsappreciateandunderstandsomeofsuchtricks,theywilleitherchooseasuitableoneorcombineseveralonestomaketheirown,thuscausingtroublesforthesecureofoursociety.

　　Wittytricksanddramaticendingsarejustpullingupcrimes,butitistheviolencesceneswhichareignorantofpreciouslivesthatmakeacrimeintoaviolentcrime.Iftherewerefewercoldbloodedkillingandfewerfiercefightinginthemovies,oursocietymightbecomeamoreharmonyworld.

　　Admittedly,violenceinfilmsnotnecessaryalwaysleadstoviolentcrimes,andtheymayhavesomepositiveeffectsontheaudience.Governmentsdon’tneedtobanthem,butshouldimposelimitationsonthepercentageofviolenceinfilmsaswellasonagegroups.Inthisway,thedecreaseinthenumberofviolentcrimesispredictable.