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  托福作文求批改Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatiftheycheatothers,theywillhaveadvantagesoverothersortheycouldtakeadvantagefromother

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  Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.

  Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatiftheycheatothers,theywillhaveadvantagesoverothersortheycouldtakeadvantagefromothers.ButIholdtheoppositeopinion.Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.

  Tobeginwith,nomatterwhatrelationshipitis,alwaystellingthetruthisveryvital.Forexample,alwaystellingthetruthisveryimportantinfriendship.IusedtobeangrywithafriendLilywhoalwaystoldmeIlookedawful.Butwhenweseparate,IrealizethereisnobodytellmewhatItrulylooklike.Whenotherslaughatme,thereisnobodynoticeme.ThatiswhyIvaluehonestthatmuchwhenImakefriendswithothers.

  Alwaystellingthetruthalsogoesforbusinessrelationship.Onlythepeoplewhowanthisbusinessexistsseveraldayswillcheattheircustomer.InChina,thereisafood-safetyincidenthappenedin2008.Oneofthefamousmilkcompany'smilkpowderwasaffirmedtocontainachemicalelementwhichwilldoharmtolittlebaby.Later,theotherfamousmilkcompanies'productionswereconfirmedtohavemoreorlittlethatkindofchemicalelement.ThisreallyannoyedChinese,theChinesemilkindustrycametoitswinter.Thisincidentteachesusalessonnevertelllieinbusinessrelationshipespeciallytocustomer.

  Admittedly,nobodycouldtellthetruthineveryrelationship.Forexample,whenyourworkmateaskyousomeprivatequestion,youdonotneedtotellhimthetruth.Youcantellhimitisaprivatequestionyoudonotwanttoanswerandthisisnotalie.Sometimeswechoosenottotellthepatienttheirdiseasesuchascancer.Therearesomesimilarsituationswehavetomakeupsomelieforgoodintentionthatiswhywesay"always"not"everytime"

  Forthereasonsabove,Ithinkalwaystellingthetruthisthemostvitalinanyrelationshipright.AndIalsoholdtheopinionthatifyousticktothis,youwillbenefitfromthis.

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2020-10-02 23:26
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李文华

  其实你的文章结构有点乱.你最好不要把tellingthetruthisvital作为mainpoint,而应用mainpoint来论证它,而且你第二段的mainpoint和第一段重复了.分数Fine左右

2020-10-02 23:27:56
接道良

  前面说的挺对的不过什么是分数fine·····还有有没有什么语法错误之类的

2020-10-02 23:30:20
李文华

  有三个档次goodfinelimited————小错误没关系的

2020-10-02 23:33:23

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