短文改错Dearjim,Iwaspleasedtohearfromyouandiamwrittentotellyousomethingabo...短文改错Dearjim,Iwaspleasedtohearfromyouandiamwrittentotellyousomethingaboutthechangesinmyschool.Youareright.Greatchangeshav

　　短文改错Dearjim,Iwaspleasedtohearfromyouandiamwrittentotellyousomethingabo...

　　短文改错Dearjim,

　　Iwaspleasedtohearfromyouandiamwrittentotellyousomethingaboutthechangesinmyschool.

　　Youareright.Greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinmyschool.Itisnotlongerwhatitusedtobethreeyearsago,whentherewereonlyoneteachingbuildingandaplayground.Iamhappytotellyoutwonewbuildingshavebeenbuiltandareonuse.Oneofthemisanewclassroombuilding,initthereareroomsformusic,artsandcomputerteaching.Theotherisalibrary,wherethereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.However,myschoolisgoodequippedwithsportsfacilitiesandmusicalinstruments.Thenumberofstudentshasalsogrownfrom1500to2500.Whatismore,wehadplantedalotoftreesandflowersinandaroundtheschool.

　　Ibelievemyschoolbecomebetterandbetter,andihopeyouwillvisitmyschoolagain.

　　Yours,LiHua