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　　谁能帮我改一下这篇文章的语法和词汇错误啊58,thiswasmyaveragemarkofEnglishinseniorhighschool.105,thiswasmyEnglishmarkofuniversityentranceexamination.Tome,itwasamiracle.Inmyseniorhighschool,myEnglishwasve

　　谁能帮我改一下这篇文章的语法和词汇错误啊

　　58,thiswasmyaveragemarkofEnglishinseniorhighschool.105,thiswasmyEnglishmarkofuniversityentranceexamination.Tome,itwasamiracle.

　　Inmyseniorhighschool,myEnglishwasverypoor.Becauseofpoor,Ididnotlike.Ineverrecitedwords;IneverreadanyEnglisharticle;IevenneverlistenedEnglish.Sometimes,IwouldsleepontheEnglishclass.IhatedEnglish.Ihatedit.

　　However,evenIdidnotlikeit;evenmyEnglishwaspoor.Istillhadadream.Idreamedthatoneday,IcouldspeakfluentEnglishwithnativespeaker;IdreamedthatIcouldunderstandEnglishnewsonTV;Idreamedthatoneday,IcouldreadJaneAusteninEnglish.Butitwasadream.Itnevercomestrue.

　　Oneday,myfriendsaidtome:”Iwanttoworkhard,IwanttogethighmarkofEnglish,Iwanttobeamiracle.”

　　“Tobeamiracle,canI“Iaskedmyself,“MaybeIcan.”

　　Fromthatday,llearnedEnglishinapositiveway.llistenedEnglishradio;llisteneditonthewaytohome;IlisteneditwhenIslept.Exceptlistening,IbegantoreadEnglisharticleandnewspaper.Fromthatday,IwasneversleepingontheEnglishclass.Itwasveryhardtimetome,butIdidnotsay,“Idon’twanttolearnit.”IdidnotknowthatthesethingscouldhelpmetogethighmarkofEnglish.Ijustknewthattheseweregoodforme.

　　105,toyoumaybeItdoesnotaveryhighmark,but,tomeitwasamiracle.Today,Istillcan’tspeakfluentEnglish;Istillcan’tunderstandEnglishnews;Istillcan’treadJaneAusten.However,Ibelievethatmydreamwillcometrueinthefuture.

　　ThisisthebiggestchallengeIhaveencounteredinmystudies.

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　　58,thiswasmyaveragemarkofEnglishinseniorhighschool.105,thiswasmyEnglishmarkofuniversityentranceexamination.Tome,itwasamiracle.

　　Dutingmyseniorhighschoolyears,myEnglishwasverypoor.Becauseofthat,IdidnotlikeEnglish.Inevermemorizedanywords;IneverreadanyEnglisharticles;IneverlistenedtoEnglishCDs.Sometimes,IwouldsleepduringEnglishclasses.IhatedEnglish.Ihatedit.

　　However,eventhoughIdidnotlikeit;eventhoughmyEnglishwaspoor,Istillhadadream.Idreamedthatoneday,IcouldspeakfluentEnglishwithnativespeakers;IdreamedthatIcouldunderstandEnglishnewsonTV;Idreamedthatoneday,IcouldreadJaneAusteninEnglish.Butitwasadream.Itwouldnevercometrue.

　　Oneday,myfriendsaidtome:”Iwanttoworkhard,IwanttogethighmarksinEnglish,Iwanttobeamiracle.”

　　“CanIbeamiracle?“Iaskedmyself,“MaybeIcan.”

　　Fromthatdayon,lstudiedEnglishinapositiveway.llistenedtoEnglishradio;llistenedtoitonthewayhome;IlistenedtoitwhenIslept.Besideslistening,IbegantoreadEnglisharticlesandnewspapers.Fromthatdayon,IneversleepedduringEnglishclasses.Itwasveryhardforme,butIdidnotsay,“Idon’twanttostudyanymore.”IdidnotknowthatdoingthesethingscouldhelpmegethighermarksinEnglish.Ijustknewthatitwasgoodforme.

　　105,toyoumaybeitdoesnotseemlikeaveryhighmark,buttomeitwasamiracle.Today,Istillcan’tspeakfluentEnglish;Istillcan’tunderstandEnglishnews;Istillcan'treadJaneAusten.However,Ibelievethatmydreamwillcometrueinthefuture.

　　ThisisthebiggestchallengeIhaveencounteredinmystudies.

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