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  谁能帮我修改一下这篇作文呢?有很多语法错的,谢!MyDateTodayisFriday,July25,2008,isthedayIwaitforlongtime,andtodayismythirddaytocomehere.Wheremyauntsin..BecausemymotherthinkthatIamtooshytog

  谁能帮我修改一下这篇作文呢?有很多语法错的,谢!

  MyDate

  TodayisFriday,July25,2008,isthedayIwaitforlongtime,andtodayismythirddaytocomehere.Wheremyauntsin..BecausemymotherthinkthatIamtooshytogetonwellwithotherpeople.Soshewantsmetocometohersister’scompanytohaveatryhowtogetonwellwiththepeople.Atfirst,Iwasnotagreetohere,becauseIthinkIamtooyoungandIt’snotneccesaryformetoknowtoomuchaboutthewaytogetonwellwitheveryone.Butthroughourtalkbetweenmymotherandme,finally,Idecidedtocarryoncominghere.ThereasonisIdon’tliketoreviewthethingsthatIlearntonsenioroneandIneedtoopenmymindtotalkwithotherpeople.TheimportantreasonIthinkofisthistimemymarkisverybadinourclass,soIhavenoanyreasonstorefusemymother’sdemand.SoIhavekeptonworkingforthreeday.Andtodayisthethirdday.

  Irememberonthefirstday,mymothertookmetomyantie’scompanyandmyantietookmetothethirdfloor.Whenwecameintotheoffice,everyonewashardworkingandkeptquite.SoIwalkedquitely,too.Wewentnearbyalady,”ThisisssterA.”Myauntsaid,.”Hello,sisterA.”Thenwewentbynextone.”ThisisbrotherB””Hello.”Isaidwithasmile.Thejuniorhereforafewtimewhowasgraduatedfrom…Iforgotit.Thenmyauntaskedthejuniortotakecareofmeandwentaway.Thejuniorisclear,heunderstoodthereasonmyauntaskedhimtotakecareofmeisweallastudentnewhere.Andheiskeentotaughtmehowtousedphotoshop,howtodrawapictureaboutthebuilding.Onthefirstday,Ionlydrewtwopictures.Onthewaybackhome,ItoldmymotherthatIdon’twanttostayatthecompanytomorrow.BecauseIfeltIhavenothingtolearn.ThethingsIlearntisuselessforme.Ithoughtmymotherwillagreetomelikeusedtobe.Butthewordsshesaidsurprisedme,”Noway!”SuddenlyIfeltmyheartdroppedintotothedeepseaandmybodyhasstrongwindandheavyrain.”Why?!”IspokeloudlybecauseIcouldn’tcontrolmyself.”

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  MyDate

  ItisFriday,July25,2008.TodayisthedaythatIhavebeenwaitingforlongtime,anditisthethirddaythaticamehere,wheremyauntis.BecausemymotherthinksthatIamtooshytogetonwellwithotherpeople,soshewantsmetocometohersister’scompanytotakeatryandseehowIcangetalongwithpeople.Atfirst,Ididnotagreetocomehere,becauseIthoughtIamtooyoungandit'snotneccesaryformetoknowtoomuchaboutthewaytogetonwellwitheveryone.Butafterhadatalkwithmymother,finally,Idecidedtocarryoncominghere.ThereasonisIdon’tliketoreviewthethingsthatIlearntonsenioroneandIneedtoopenmymindandtalkwithotherpeople.ThemostimportantreasonIconcernedisthistimemymarkwasverybadinmyclass,soIhadnoreasontorefusemymother’sdemand.ThussIhavekeptonworkingforthreedays.Andtodayisthethirdday.

  Irememberonthefirstday,mymothertookmetomyantie’scompanyandmyantietookmetothethirdfloor.Whenwecameintotheoffice,everyonewasworkinghardandkeptquiet.SoIwalkedquietlytoo.Wewentclosetoalady,”ThisissisterA.”Myauntsaid,.”Hello,sisterA.”Thenwewenttonextone.”ThisisbrotherB””Hello.”Isaidwithasmile.Thejuniorhereforafewtimewhograduatedfrom…Iforgotit.Thenmyauntaskedthejuniortotakecareofme,thenshewentaway.Thejuniorclearlyunderstoodthatthereasonmyauntaskedhimtolookaftermeiswebotharestudentsnewtohere.Andheiskeentoteachmehowtousedphotoshopandhowtodrawapictureaboutthebuilding.Onthefirstday,Ionlydrewtwopictures.Onmywayhome,ItoldmymotherthatIdidn'twanttostayatthecompanytomorrow,becauseIfelttherewasnothingtolearn.ThethingsIhadlearntisuselesstome.Ithoughtmymotherwouldagreewithmeassheusedtobe.Butthewordsshesaidsurprisedme,”Noway!”SuddenlyIfeltmyheartfellintotothedeepseaandmybodyhadstrongwindandheavyrain.”Why?!”IcriedloudlybecauseIcouldn’tcontrolmyself.”

  Theremustbesomemistakeididnotfindout.Alsoiamnotsureididitcorrectly.GoodLuck:-)

2020-10-10 06:25:54

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