【我想知道自己目前托福写作的大概水平,想请教下各位看能不能帮我指点一下我的作文,看看能得多少分大概题目：Ithasbeensaid,“Noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks.”Compareandcontrastkn】

　　我想知道自己目前托福写作的大概水平,想请教下各位看能不能帮我指点一下我的作文,看看能得多少分大概

　　题目：Ithasbeensaid,“Noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks.”Compareandcontrastknowledgegainedfromexperiencewithknowledgegainedfrombooks.Inyouropinion,whichsourceismoreimportant?Why?

　　Itisridiculoustosaythateverythingislearnediscontainedinbooks,theexperienceisnotimportant.

　　Admittedly,wecanlearnmanythingsfrombooksandwereadbookswhenwearekidsevenwegrowup.Booksarealwaysknowledgeableandvivid,for,thereareamassofuniversaltruth,picturesandtheoreticalknowledgeinbooks.Anyway,IdoreallylovereadingbooksandIenjoythehappythatbooksbroughttome.ButIstillbelievethatknowledgegainedfromexperiencesismoreimportantthangainedfrombooks.

　　Firstofall,bookscannotshowanythingtousandwhatshoulddoorwhatshouldnotdobutourexperiencesdo.Wewillhavenoideabyreadingbookswhenwehaveatoughproblem.However,ifweexperiencesomethingandwemakeamistake,itisgoodforourfuturebecauseweknowitmakesabigfaulttodoitinthisway,so,wewillnevermakethemisslikewhatwehavemadeinthelasttime.

　　Atthesecondplace,experiencesshowushowtodoit.Thereisanexamplehappenedinmylife.Once,IgofordinnerinmyfriendwhonamedSue,Iarrivedherhomeandwentintoherhouseandgotafoundherkitchenwasinchaos.Iwasignorantofwhathappened,soIaskedSuewhowasmakingaphonetotherestaurant.Sheshowedmeacookbookandexplainedthatshewantedtomakeacakebyfollowingthisbookandshedidbutmadeafailyetbyshehadbeennevermadeacakebefore.Ihelphertocleanthekitchenandthen,Itaughtherhowtomakeacakebymyexperiencebefore.So,wesee,experiencesaremoreimportantthenknowledgefrombooks.

　　Itistrueknowledgefrombooksisalsoimportantforusandtheytaughtusalotofthings.Wecannotignorethegainfrombooks.Wegetknowledgefrombooksinageneralwaybutinamoredirectandrealisticwayfromourexperiences.

　　Tosumup,itismoreimportanttogainknowledgefromexperiencesbutbooks.Itotallyagreewithaproverbwhichsaid“Noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks”andknowhowsignificantexperiencesare.