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  【英语翻译Therapiddevelopmentoftheknowledgeeconomymadetheinternettobeathemes.Itisnotonlyasymbolizeofthefashionandtrend,butalsoacountry’sembodimentofthetechnologicalleveleventhecomprehensivenationalstrength.Alth】

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  Therapiddevelopmentoftheknowledgeeconomymadetheinternettobeathemes.Itisnotonlyasymbolizeofthefashionandtrend,butalsoacountry’sembodimentofthetechnologicalleveleventhecomprehensivenationalstrength.Althoughwebeginthecomputerverylate,butitisswiftinaction.DependonthedatadisplayfromtheCNNI:cutoffdatefromJulne,2001,theonlineroftheChinamorethantwentymillion,thereinto,therearealargenumberofteenager.Butwhataretheydoingontheinternet?What’stheinfluenceoftheinternet?Advantagesordisadvantages?Itinfluencestheteenager’sPhysicalandMentalHealthaswellastheirphilosophy、valuessomanyareas.Weneedtoanalysistheimmanentcauseoftheinternet’sinfluencesothatwecanenhancethemanagementonthewebandsupervisionbypublicopinion,promotetheInternetindustrydevelopinahealthywayforthepublic,especiallytheteenagers.请帮我改改语法,

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  1,Itisnotonlyasymbolizeofthefashionandtrend,这句,改成倒装会更高级:notonlyisit……

  2.Althoughwebeginthecomputerverylate,这句不好,根据你的意思可以修改成Althoughwedidn‘tmakeagreatprogressinearlyyears.

  3,Depend-->Depending,teenager--->teenagers

  4,theirphilosophy、valuessomanyareas.顿号改逗号,英语没顿号.somanyareas改成andsoon

  5,Weneedtoanalysistheimmanentcauseoftheinternet’sinfluencesothatwecanenhancethemanagementonthewebandsupervisionbypublicopinion,promotetheInternetindustrydevelopinahealthywayforthepublic,especiallytheteenagers最后一句有点混乱,不一定非要用上sothat句型,而且especiallytheteenagers也略显啰嗦.

  theimmanentcauseoftheinternet’sinfluenceshouldbeanalysisedthatthemanagementonthewebandsupervisionbypublicopinionwillbeenhanced.Inall,letusgoforittomakeamoreharmonyenvironmentofInternet!

  如果我的回答能给予您一定的帮助,!

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