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  【英语,这段文章有无语病?这段文章有无语病:Infact,Americansfeelaspecialresponsibilityforthepoorandtheweak.Ourgovernmentspendsbillionsofdollarstoprovidehealthcareandfoodandhousingforthosewhocannothelpthemsel】

  英语,这段文章有无语病?

  这段文章有无语病:

  Infact,Americansfeelaspecialresponsibilityforthepoorandtheweak.Ourgovernmentspendsbillionsofdollarstoprovidehealthcareandfoodandhousingforthosewhocannothelpthemselvesandevenmoreimportant,manyofourcitizenscontributetheirownmoneyandtimetohelpthoseinneed.Americancompassionstretcheswaybeyondourborders.Wearethenumberoneproviderofhumanitarianaidtopeopleinneedthroughouttheworld.AsforthemenandwomenofourFBIandlawenforcement,theyarethemselvesworkingpeoplewhodevotetheirlivestofightingcrimeandcorruption.

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2020-10-22 00:02
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马伟华

  第二行,healthcare和food之间的and改成逗号

  剩下的虽然有些觉得不太顺,但好像语法还行...btw,这文章写得真够脸皮厚的了...

2020-10-22 00:06:02

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