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  请帮忙检查一下这篇短文,如有错误,请提出,谢谢!DearDavid,It’sverykindofyoutowritetomeandletmeknowaboutyourbeautifulcity.NowI’llintroducemyhometowntoyou,TianjinistothesoutheastofBeijing,it’s

  请帮忙检查一下这篇短文,如有错误,请提出,谢谢!

  DearDavid,

  It’sverykindofyoutowritetomeandletmeknowaboutyourbeautifulcity.NowI’llintroducemyhometowntoyou,TianjinistothesoutheastofBeijing,it’soneofthemostbeautifulcityinChina.Ithas600years’history,itisfamousforQuanyeStoreandFoodStreet.

  Recentyears,webuildmoredepartmants,tallbuildings,roadsetc.

  Butwestillhavemanyproblems,e.g.:wearelackofwater,airpollution,

  trafficcongestion.Andwebelievewecansolvetheproblemssoonandmakethiscitybetterandbetter.Hopingyoucancomehereinthefuture,somuchforthis.

  Bestwishes,

  Yours,

  LiHua

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何曙光

  整体不错,有几点需要修改第一、oneofthemostbeautifulcities(中国漂亮的城市有很多,此处用复数;另外,oneof后也跟复数)第二,wearelackofwater,airpollution,trafficcongestion,注意到lackof后面的三...

2020-10-21 23:38:05

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