请英语高手帮我改作文Asisvividlybetrayedinthechartabove,thenumberofprivatecarshasbeenclimbingovertheyearsandrocketedtoover13millioninourcountryintheyearof2004.Mostofpeopleareoftheopinionthatthisisas

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　　Asisvividlybetrayedinthechartabove,thenumberofprivatecarshasbeenclimbingovertheyearsandrocketedtoover13millioninourcountryintheyearof2004.Mostofpeopleareoftheopinionthatthisisasymbolofourimprovedlivingstandard.Butdotheyrealizethatincreasingcarshaveledtoseriousenvironmentalpollution?Scientistshavewarnedthatunlesseffectivemeasuresaretaken,theproblemofpollutionwilleventuallygetoutofhand.Thereforeweshouldattachsignificancetosolvingit.

　　Thereare,Ithink,atleasttwofeasiblewaystocopywithit.Thefirstwaytotackleitistoappealtoauthoritiestotakemeasurestocontrolthequantityofprivatecars.Withthehelpofgovernments,howevergreatthewilltoachieve,andhowevergreatthedemandtosucceed,weshouldneverabandonourmoralandsocialconsciousness.Theotherwaythatisworthadoptingistoworkoutnewregulations.Wemustengageinthroughdiscussionsinordertogainabettersenseofthemostappropriateandeffectivewaytoproceedwithenhancingthepublic'sawarenessofinvironmentaldestruction.Onlyinthiswaycanwesucceedinsolvingtheprobleminthenearfuture.

　　Toconclude,weshouldnotyieldtomediocrityregardlessofseeminglyinsurmountableobstacles.Thetrendtowardsraisingthegeneralpublic'sconsciousnessofprotectingenvironmentwillinevitablymaketheworldabetterplace.Sotheprospectwearelookingforwardtowillbebrightandencouraging.

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