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　　【写了一篇作文,但是没有老师帮我改,麻烦高手帮我改改,谢谢.Withthedevelopmentoftechnologyandinformation,wewholiveinthisage,feelmoreandmoreourlifestylesisgraduallychanged.Itbecomesfasterandmoreefficientlyt】

　　写了一篇作文,但是没有老师帮我改,麻烦高手帮我改改,谢谢.

　　Withthedevelopmentoftechnologyandinformation,wewholiveinthisage,feelmoreandmoreourlifestylesisgraduallychanged.Itbecomesfasterandmoreefficientlytogoshopping,communicatewithfriendsandsoforth.TheeducationaswellisnotconfinedintheclassroombutexpandtotheInternet.

　　Asweallknow,onlong-distanceeducationhasconsiderableadvantages.Butthesefollowingthreemaybeisthemostimportant.Thefirstoneisthatitnarrowsthedistancebetweentheprofessorandthestudent.Theprofessorisgivinghislectureinacity,andthestudentwhoislistentohimatthattimemaybeinanothercity,evenanothercountry.Howamazing!Thesecondoneisthatitenableeveryonewhoneedandsuittoreceivethelong-distanceeducationhastheequivalentchancetoenhancehimselfwithoutpassingsomeexamination.Thelastbutnotleastoneisthatsavingmoneyandtimeiseitheritscharacteristics.

　　Onlong-distanceeducationhoweverisnotsuiteveryperson.Ifonepreferreadingtogainknowledge,he'dbettergotothelibrary.Ifonewanttostudyinaco-operationsurrounding,he'dbettergototheschool.

　　Inaword,theattitudetothiswayoflearningvaryfromdifferentpeople.

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2019-07-11 01:38

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权进国

　　,feelmoreandmoreourlifestylesisgraduallychanged.___canfeelthebigchangesofourlife-styles

　　Itbecomesfasterandmoreefficienttogoshopping,aswellasthecommunicatewithfriends.TheeducationisnolongerconfinedintheclassroombutexpandstotheInternet.

　　Asweallknow,long-distanceeducationhasconsiderableadvantages.thefollowingthreemaybethemoreimportant.firstly,itnarrowsthedistancebetweentheprofessorandthestudent.Theprofessorisgivinghislectureinacity,andthestudentsaroundthecountrycanlistentohimatthattime.Howamazingitis!Thesecondoneisthatitenableeveryonewhoneedandsuittoreceivetheeducationhastheequivalentchancetoenhancehimselfwithoutpassingsomeexaminations.Thelastbutnotleast,savingmoneyandtimeisitscharacteristics.

　　Onlong-distanceeducation,however,isnotsuitableforeveryperson.Ifonepreferreadingtogainknowledge,he'dbettergotothelibrary.Ifonewanttostudyinaco-operationsurrounding,he'dbettergototheschool.

　　Inaword,theattitudetothiswayoflearningvaryfromdifferentpeople.(你的这个结论和前面的偶不搭啊,最好改成与thelong-termeducation有关的)

2019-07-11 01:41:49

韩月敏

　　谢谢你的帮忙。这篇文章主题是''onlong-distanceeducation"，要说清楚1，我们的生活方式在改变2，远程教育的优点，3远程教育并不适合每个人。这样子，怎么结尾好呢？我写的时候也感觉结尾怪怪的，可是总得结一个啊。

　　如果按100分算的话。我这样能得多少分呢？谢谢。

2019-07-11 01:44:57

权进国

　　等你采纳了我的答案，我再告诉你

2019-07-11 01:48:24

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