【这篇雅思作文可以得几分?请大家点评一下.Somepeoplesaidthegovernmentshouldn’tputmoneyonbuildingtheatresandsportsstadiums;theyshouldspendmoremoneyonmedicalandeducation.Agreeornotagree?Ithinkthegovernment】

　　这篇雅思作文可以得几分?请大家点评一下.

　　Somepeoplesaidthegovernmentshouldn’tputmoneyonbuildingtheatresandsportsstadiums;theyshouldspendmoremoneyonmedicalandeducation.Agreeornotagree?

　　Ithinkthegovernmentshouldbalancethebudgetandspendmoremoneyontotherecreationalfacilities’investmentsuchasbuildingnewtheatresandsportsstadiums.

　　Therearetworeasonstosupportmypointofview.Oneisthattheentertainmentservicesliketheatre,stadiumorgamecenteretc,releasepeoplefromhighpressuredailywork.Thiscanreducementallyproblemsofcitizensinthemodernsociety,whichifhandlewithcarelessness,willalsoleadyoutohospital.Second,entertainmentserviceisakeypartoftheserviceindustryandtheserviceindustryplaysamoreandmoreimportantroleinthenationaleconomy.Thatmeansitwillalsosupporttobuildmoremedicalandeducationfacilities.

　　Andcontrarily,withthespeedydevelopmentofeconomy,manybasicfacilitiesofmodernsocietylikehospitalandschoolhavealreadybeenbuilttheseyearsandmanyoldhospitalandschoolarealsoupgraded.Theyaregoodbothinqualitiesandquantity.

　　Intheword,itistimetoshiftthebudgetandresourcetosomeotherareas,whichcandrivethedevelopmentofeconomy.Andastheresult,youwillgetmoremoneytobuildanewschooloranewhospital.