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英语作文帮我评评分和改正下`拜托!MyfavouriteanimalMyfavouriteanimalisdog,soIgotadogfrommyparentswhenatmy13birthday.MyfamiliesallcallitCiCi.Ithastwobigeyes,asmallnoseandtwosharpears.CiCiwearsabrownclo
英语作文帮我评评分和改正下`拜托!
Myfavouriteanimal
Myfavouriteanimalisdog,soIgotadogfrommyparentswhenatmy13birthday.
MyfamiliesallcallitCiCi.Ithastwobigeyes,asmallnoseandtwosharpears.CiCiwearsabrownclothesandabigroundcycleinit.Itlooksverylovely!Italwayswalksaroundandaroundathomeandsometimesmakesuslaugh.Itlikeseatingbonesbetter.Itdoesn’tliketoeatchocolateorvegetables.ButCiCihasabadhabit——That’sshesoisshytosomebody!
Ilovemydog.I’lltakegoodcareofit.
我不知道我这篇作文写得怎样,自由发挥的,如果满分为10分,那我该得多少啊?哪里错帮我改正下啊,
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2020-11-01 06:26