请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎自己用有道翻译了一遍,因为老师太严了怕出错,所以请帮忙再检查一遍.Thankmyparentsforgivingmylife.

　　请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎

　　自己用有道翻译了一遍,因为老师太严了怕出错,所以请帮忙再检查一遍.

　　Thankmyparentsforgivingmylife.They'resodiligentthatthemkeeponworkingalldaylonginordertomakealiving.Andthey'resoselflessthatthemalwayskeepallgoodthingsforme.Parentshavemadealltheycandotohelpmegrow.

　　Withagratefulhearttotreattheirparentswithasincerehearttogowiththeirparents,nottobetakenforgrantedthatparentsdoanythingtohelpus,theytookustothisbeautifulworld,isgreatenough,andourparentingadults,notaskingforanything,wehavetopayforsilence,westopblindlytodemandtheirpay,Thanksgivingit,thankparentsfortheirbitbybit.

　　WhenIamhappy,theywouldsharemyhappinesswithme,myparentsarethepeoplewholovemebest,soIhavenoexcusenottolovethem.

　　Iwilltrymybest,Iwanttoseethesmileintheireyes.Ilovethemforever