【帮忙改一下这篇英语短文就下面这篇,感觉里面有不少语法错误,还有的句子不太好,最好也能换一下,beyourselfnomatterwhoyouare,atinyboy,afatgirl,wehavetherightstobethepersonwewannatobe,thoughi】
帮忙改一下这篇英语短文
就下面这篇,感觉里面有不少语法错误,还有的句子不太好,最好也能换一下,
beyourself
nomatterwhoyouare,atinyboy,afatgirl,wehavetherightstobethepersonwewannatobe,thoughiamshort,ilikeplaybaseketball,andicouldfindfuninit,theniplay,ilikeeaticecream,idonotcarehowmanyfatitcontains,andieat
sowhatisthemostimportantistobeyourselflikesomebodysaid:
tosinging,likenobodylistentoyou
todanceing,likenobodylookatyou
tolove,likeneverbeinghurtbefore