Dear Linlin，

　　Thanks for your letter．Your new hobby sounded great．I'm not very well at painting．My hobby is reading．I really enjoy read about famous people，like singers or actors．I've just read a book about Shakespeare，what is very interested．And Last month I have given a book by my parents about Britney Spearsfor my birthday．I haven't read many books in English yet．I tried reading Harry Potter，but I didn't enjoy them．Because of there were too many word I didn't understand．Please write to me soon or tell me about your painting lessons．

　　Love，

　　Li Hua．

　　详

　　1．sounded改为sounds考查动词时态．sound意为"听起来"，指的是现在的情况，要用一般现在时态，且主语hobby是单数形式，谓语动词也应用单数三人称形式sounds．

　　2．well改为good考查形容词．begoodat意为"擅长"，是固定搭配．

　　3．read改为reading考查动名词．enjoy后接动词时要用动名词形式．

　　4．what改为which考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词a book指物，且在从句中作主语，用关系代词which，what不引导定语从句．

　　5．interested改为interesting考查现在分词．现在分词作表语主要表示主语的性质和特征．

　　6．have改为was考查动词时态和语态．"书已给"，要用一般过去时的被动语态．

　　7．them改为it考查代词．it指代Harry Potter这本书．

　　8．去掉of考查词语用法．becauseof意为"因为"，是介词短语，后接名词或代词作宾语；because意为"因为"，是连词，连接句子．此处连接的是句子，要用连词．

　　9．word改为words考查名词复数．word是可数名词，其前有many修饰时要用复数形式．

　　10．or改为and考查连词．前后连接两个祈使句，表示并列关系，而非选择关系．