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  帮忙看一下这篇文章有没有什么错误?PleasemakegooduseofyourlifeDearleadersteachersandschoolmates.Goodmorning!Today,mytopicis“takecareofyourlife,please.”Agreatpersonhavesaid:Eitheryoumakegooduseofyourlife,o

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  Pleasemakegooduseofyourlife

  Dearleadersteachersandschoolmates.Goodmorning!

  Today,mytopicis“takecareofyourlife,please.”

  Agreatpersonhavesaid:Eitheryoumakegooduseofyourlife,oryourlifemakesuseofyou.agoodheartissignificant,itdependsonwhoishourse,whoishero.Newtermbegins,youIandeveryoneelsestartsanew.Thistimeisdifferentfrombefore.Maybeyouhaven’tfoundhowharditis,buttherearemoreandmoredifficulties.Juniorthreeishere.

  Maybewehadsuccessedyesterday,butthathasbeenagoodmemery.Maybewewereintrouble,butthatisthepast.Forgetit.

  Dearschoolmates,studyishard,butdon’tcomplainabouttheexpectionwhocaresofyou.Weneedteaching.Themostimportantthingiswhereverweare,weshouldgoahead.Weshoulddaretoshowourdisadvangtages,makegooduseofourlife.AnAmerianpresidentgotthebadillnesswhenhewasababy,nobodycouldunderstandhiswords,buthedidn’tgiveuphisdream.Hisactivitiesmadehimwin.

  Perfectdependsondrops.Educationdependsondrops.Lifealsodependsondrops.Perfect,education,lifewillmakeupthemostfascinatingsong.

  AsXinglingstudentsweshouldtreasureeverydaytostudy.Let’smakegooduseofourlife.Let’sfightforourbrightfuture!

  That’sall.Thankyou!

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李生民

  第四行:"Agreatpersonhavesaid",把have去掉第六行"youIandeveryoneelsestartsanew"是个非常奇怪的表述,you和I可以不用写,这句可改为:"everyonehasanewstart"同样是第六行"Thistimeisdifferentf...

2020-11-16 03:09:11

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