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　　Mydearfriends,

　　Readingisveryimportant.Wecangetknowledgethroughreading.Itcannotonlyopenourminds,butalsomakeuscleverandhappier.Ourstudycanbeimprovedifwereadmoregoodbooks.Themoreweread,themorewewilllearn,andthebrighterourfuturewillbecome.

　　However,somestudentsspendmuchtimeinlisteningtomusic,watchingTVorgoingonlinetoplaygames.Ittakesmuchoftheirsparetime。SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadmorebooks,especiallyreadclassicssothatwecanspreadourChinesetraditionalculturetotheworld.

　　Let’sstartreadingnow.Andletitbecomeapartofourlife!

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