【请高手帮忙改英语作文的一部分,内容很空洞,都是大白话.主要看语法,MylovestoryWell,it’sprettylongaboutmylovestory.ImetmypresentboyfriendinOctober2007,Iwas18.Youknowthatagirlinthatageisverypure,met】

　　请高手帮忙改英语作文的一部分,内容很空洞,都是大白话.主要看语法,

　　Mylovestory

　　Well,it’sprettylongaboutmylovestory.ImetmypresentboyfriendinOctober2007,Iwas18.

　　Youknowthatagirlinthatageisverypure,metoo.Iusedtowritesomelittlethingsaboutmylifeininternetblogs,likewhatIdidtoday,whatmymoodwasliketoday,somethinglikethat.Then,oneday,Ifoundastrangerwhocalled‘AWormInBeijing’hadvisitedtomywebsitewithoutleavingaword,it’scommon,becauseininternet,peopledonotalwayssaysomethingtosomeonetheydon’tknow.SoIdidnotputmymindonthis,Ijustthought:“Oh,it’safunnyname”,that’sall.

　　Sincethat,hehadalwayscometovisitme,butstillsayingnothing.IlearntthatheisahandsomeguywholivedinIndonesia.PerhapsheisnotChinese,Ithought.SoIwenttohiswebsiteoneeveningandsaidinEnglish:“AreyouChinese?”Igothisrepliesimmediately:“IamChinese,butIworkinIndonesianow”.ThatwasinChinese.Then,atthatnight,wehadtalkedalittleabouteachother.Ilearntthathewas20,andhe’sfromBeijingandhadworkedinIndonesiaforsixmonths.

　　Ididn’tthinkhecouldbecometoapersonwhoisimportanttomeatthattime,Ithoughthejustapasserinmylife.But,youneverknowwhatiscomingforyou,don’tyou?

　　Oneday,wemetagain,heaskedmeformyphonenumberbecausehewasverybusysothathecouldn’talwayskeepusingtheblogtochatwithme.Ihesitated,becauseIdidnotknowifhewasabadmanornot.HeseemedtoknowwhatIwasthinking,sohesaid:“itsokay,ifyoudon’twanttogivemethenumber,Iunderstand,Iamstillastrangertoyounow,Ijustwanttolearnyoumore,andIalsocanwait.”SoIdidn’tgivehimmynumber.Sincethat,wehadtalkedsomeininternetforsometimewhenwehadfreetime.

　　Duringthenextthreemonths,wespentasmuchtimeaspossiblechatting.HewasveryhumorousthatIcouldn’thelplaughingatsomethinghehadtalked.He’salsokindly.Then,atthenightontheeveofSpringFestiveDay,Igavemynumbertohim.Hewassosurprise.

　　Thenextday,Igotaphonecall.Therewastoomuchzerosinthefrontofthenumber.Ihadafeelingthatwashim.Ireceivedthecall.Avoicecamethroughthephone,“Hello”hesaid.Isaidhitohimtoo.ItwasthefirsttimeIheardhisvoiceandIwasexcitedthatIdidnotknowwhat