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　　我这段英语介绍有没有错误,希望大家指出来.

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　　Inmysparetime,Ilikelisteningtomusic,Ithinkgoodmusic,Letmehaveagoodmoodtodoanything.Inadditiontomusic,Ialsolikeplayingcomputergames.ManyChinesepeoplethinkplaycomputergameshinderedpeoplestudy.ButIthinkcomputergamescouldmotivatemetolearnEnglish.

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