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  短文改错!therearetoomanycarsinourtownnow.foraresult,therearelotsoftrafficjams.andtheairwhichwewillbreatheisterrible.ourtownisveryoldbutallthestreetsarequitenarrow,sothereisnoroomforbuslanes,whichmeanthatbusesalwaysgetstuckinthetrafficjams,too.how

  短文改错!therearetoomanycarsinourtownnow.foraresult,therearelotsoftrafficjams.andtheairwhichwewillbreatheisterrible.ourtownisveryoldbutallthestreetsarequitenarrow,sothereisnoroomforbuslanes,whichmeanthatbusesalwaysgetstuckinthetrafficjams,too.however,lotsofaccidentwithcyclistsoftenhappenbecauseofcrowdedstreet.butIthinkthereisasimplesolutionofthereproblems.thegovernmentshouldclosecitycentertoalltrafficexceptbusesandbikes,andbuildverylargercarparksoutsidethetown.cardriverscantakeabusintothecitycenterandarriveatworkortheshopsrelaxingandinagoodmood.

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2020-11-17 17:51
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  不区分首字母大小写,原文是这样的,一会儿再改错吧...

  therearetoomanycarsinourtownnow.foraresult,therearelotsoftrafficjams.andtheairwhichwewillbreatheisterrible.ourtownisveryoldbutallthestreetsarequitenarrow,sothereisnoroomforbuslanes,whichmeanthatbusesalwaysgetstuckinthetrafficjams,too.however,lotsofaccidentwithcyclistsoftenhappenbecauseofcrowdedstreet.butIthinkthereisasimplesolutionofthereproblems.thegovernmentshouldclosecitycentertoalltrafficexceptbusesandbikes,andbuildverylargercarparksoutsidethetown.cardriverscantakeabusintothecitycenterandarriveatworkortheshopsrelaxingandinagoodmood.

  第一行for--as

  第二行去掉will

  but--and

  第三行mean--means

  第四行accident--accidents

  becauseof后边加the

  第五行there-these(不一定对)

  第六行larger--large(或者去掉very)

  最后一句话去掉最后一个and吧

2020-11-17 17:52:31

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