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短文改错:NowI'dliketotellyousomethingtookplaceinmyschoolyesterday.短文改错:NowI'dliketotellyousomethingtookplaceinmyschoolyesterday.Intheafernoonweareallheldtogetherforour18-years-oldb
短文改错:NowI'dliketotellyousomethingtookplaceinmyschoolyesterday.
短文改错:NowI'dliketotellyousomethingtookplaceinmyschoolyesterday.Intheafernoonweareallheldtogetherforour18-years-oldbirthday.Atthefirstwepromisedthatlikegrown-upsweshouldberesponsibleforoursociety.Thenweexpressedthanktoourparentswhoexperiencedhardshipstobringusupandourteacherswhoeducatedusheartorsoul.Andourteachersalsogavetouscardsexpressingourgoodcongratulatinsandwishestous.Firnally,weputonwonderfullyperformances.
共有10处错误,有漏词,有多余,有修改,每处错误及修改均仅限一词.
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2020-11-19 01:09