Greatchangeshave【been】takenplaceinourschool.Whenenteringtheschool,youseeabiggardenin【middle】ofit,withrowsoftrees【anywhere】.Andtherearebuildingsforteaching,experimenrsanddormitories,【that】areallequippedwiththemostadvancedequipment.Afterclass,wealsodosomesportsinthe【newly】stadiumorontheplayground.Everymoring,theloudvoiceofreading【book】canbeheardintheschool.What'smore,studentscanbeseentogetherdiscussingsomelearningproblemsor【exchange】ideas.【So】whatappealstousmostisthesmilingfaces【in】teachersandstudents.Wearelivinglikembmersofabigfamily.Inaword,I【enjoyed】myschoollifesomuch.

　　除去标点符号和几个笔误（应该是“指误”）,还有以下10个错误：

　　1.been删除

　　2.middle改为themiddle或thecenter（center更好）

　　3.anywhere改为everywhere

　　4.that改为which

　　5.newly改为new

　　6.book改为books

　　7.exchange改为exchanging

　　8.So改为But

　　9.in改为of

　　10.enjoyed改为enjoy