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  谁能帮我改改这篇英文信,因该有很多错Ifyourecivemylittle,It'sfortunate,becauseyoudidn'tleavemeyourclassnumber,YoujustgavemeyourgamertagforPS3,butIdon'thaveaPS3,IjusthaveaPSP,besidesIseldomplayvideogam

  谁能帮我改改这篇英文信,因该有很多错

  Ifyourecivemylittle,It'sfortunate,becauseyoudidn'tleavemeyourclassnumber,YoujustgavemeyourgamertagforPS3,butIdon'thaveaPS3,IjusthaveaPSP,besidesIseldomplayvideogames.

  Nextyear,Iwillenteracollege,sothisyear,Iwillbeverybusy,Ihavetostudyhard,Ialwayshardworking,butIt'shardformetomakesomeimproving.SometimesIblamemyselfI'museless.Doyoutroublewithyourstudying?

  Inmysparetime,I'dliketodosomereading,Ienjoyreadingmymagazinewhichaboutscince,andIalsoreadsomeessay.Mycompositionisnotveryoutstanding,soIwanttoimproveitbyreading.Doyoulikescince?Isometimeswatch"Descovery"and"NationalGeograpy"andIdreamtobeascintest.Tellmewhatyouwanttodointhefulture.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.mye-mailis

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  首先中文就有问题“应该”而不是“因该”--第一段little?是letter吧classnumber一班没有这样用的此外,这一段表达的意思不明,有些不知所云.第二段makesomeimproving应该是makeprogressIblamemyselfI'm...

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