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  【英语作文请指出我的英语错误并麻烦丰富一下DearMadam:MynameisZhangHong.IwanttotakepartinthiscampaignbecauseIwanttoimprovemyspeakingEnglishandknowaboutthecultureofAmeica.IaminterestedinenjoyingEnglish】

  英语作文请指出我的英语错误并麻烦丰富一下

  DearMadam:

  MynameisZhangHong.IwanttotakepartinthiscampaignbecauseIwanttoimprovemyspeakingEnglishandknowaboutthecultureofAmeica.IaminterestedinenjoyingEnglishmusic.Ihaveagoodtimetravelingwithmyparentsandmyfriends.Iamgoodatwriting.IwouldliketoLivewithafriendlyAmricanfamilywhichhasachildwhoisthesameyearsoldasme.Pleasewillwritetomesoon

  Yours,

  ZhangHong

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2020-11-27 06:38
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  错误:Pleasewillwritetomesoon这个句子有错误:无主语,可以这么改:加一个主语You

  或去掉will

  丰富:①第一句:改为IamaboywhosenameisZhangHong.

  ②IaminterestedinenjoyingEnglishmusic.可以改为:IamverypleasedwhenIlistentoEnglishmusic.

  ③Ihaveagoodtimetravelingwithmyparentsandmyfriends.改为:IamhappythatIhaveagoodtimetravelingwithmyparentsandmyfriends

2020-11-27 06:40:06

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