英语短文改错MyHometownMyhometownisasmallcountrysidetown.AsIdidn’tgobacktomyhometownsince1992.soIdon’tknowwhat’spopulationinit.Therehassomehills,ariver,somefields.WhenIwasyoung,Iverylikedtoclimbthe
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MyHometown
Myhometownisasmallcountrysidetown.AsIdidn’tgobacktomyhometownsince1992.soIdon’tknowwhat’spopulationinit.Therehassomehills,ariver,somefields.WhenIwasyoung,Iverylikedtoclimbthehillnearmyhome.SometimesIclimbedthehillwithmyclassmate.Whenwearrivedatthehilltop,wealwayshadrace,becauseallwantedtoknowwhowasfirst.Ialsorememberwhenwewenttoschool,wehadtopassriver.Sometimeswedidn’tcrossedthebridge,weswimedthewater..Inholidaywecouldcatchthesmallfishintheriver.HowagoodtimeIhad!
IlikemyhometownmorethanthecitywhichIlive,butpeoplehereareverypoor.Becausewhenthechildrenonlyhavefinishedjuniormiddleschool,they’reparentforcedthemtoleaveschool,andgotocitiestofindwork.Andthatmakethehometownpoorerandpoorer.
IthinkI’llcomebacktomyhometowntobuilditmoreandmorebeautifulafterfinishinguniversity.
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