帮我检查一下英语日记,日记要过去时吗?文章：Date,August14thWeather,SunnyTodayistheforthdayintheJeju,Korea.Wecanrestahalfday.Inthemorning,wedrunkporridge.Itwasn’tsumptuous.Then,wegotoabeach.Andwevisitedthe

　　帮我检查一下英语日记,

　　日记要过去时吗?

　　文章：Date,August14thWeather,Sunny

　　TodayistheforthdayintheJeju,Korea.Wecanrestahalfday.Inthemorning,wedrunkporridge.Itwasn’tsumptuous.Then,wegotoabeach.AndwevisitedtheYongdusan.Itwasabigstone,likeadragon.Wetookalotofphotoswithit.Myfriendfoundacrab.Hecaughtit.Itwassosmall.Afterthat,wegotoamountain.Itwas.Wedidn’tclimbit.Wedidn’thavemoretime.Itwasbehindanocean.Wesawaspeedboatonthewater.Then,wegotoavillage.Itwasveryold.Somepeoplelifeinthere.Atnoon,weateroast.Theywerepork.Ilovedthem.Theyweredelicious.Thereweremanypeopleatelunch.Intheafternoon,wewatchedothersmarchingbands’play.Theywerethebest.Theywerewonderful.ThemarchingbandformU.S.Awasagorgeousmarchingband.Tomorrow,wewilljointhefinalmatch;Iwishwecangetthefirst,goodluck!

　　hadnotime!