初中英语作文改错!急!Westudytoolongeverydayandundertoomuchpressure.Proficientsadviseustochooserightwaystorelaxourselves.TerrylikeswatchingTVandplayingcomputergamesandhethinksthesearegoodwaytorelaxhimself.

　　初中英语作文改错!急!

　　Westudytoolongeverydayandundertoomuchpressure.Proficientsadviseustochooserightwaystorelaxourselves.TerrylikeswatchingTVandplayingcomputergamesandhethinksthesearegoodwaytorelaxhimself.Inmyopinion,watchingTVandplayingcomputergamesarenotgoodwaystohelp

　　usrelaxbecausetheyarebadforyoureyestowatchforalongtime.Terryalsothinkshangingoutwithfriendsisthewayforstudentstorelax.IlikehangingoutwithmybestfriendstooandIsometimesgoshoppingwiththem.Everyonehavedifferentwaystorelax.

　　大神能纠错的同时顺便帮忙想个结尾嘛?...谢谢!