英语改错有10处thedaywhenmylifechange-查字典问答网

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　　英语改错有10处thedaywhenmylifechangedthebetterwasthedaywhenihadmetkillian,mydog.onenteringapetshops,iwassoonattractedbythislittledog,knowingasthekingofdogs.iwouldusualliedownontheflooranghewouldliedown

　　英语改错有10处

　　thedaywhenmylifechangedthebetterwasthedaywhenihadmetkillian,mydog.onenteringapetshops,iwassoonattractedbythislittledog,knowingasthekingofdogs.iwouldusualliedownontheflooranghewouldliedownbesidesme.ifilefttheroom,shewouldcryuntilireturned.itdidn'tmatterifsomeoneelsewasinaroomwithhimornot.littledidiknowthatiweremakingsoahugeinvestmentinmylife.

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2020-12-01 05:48

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杜旭辉

　　ThedaywhenmylifechangedTOthebetterwasthedaywhenIMETKillian,mydog,AFTERenteringapetSHOP.IwassoonattractedTOthislittledog,KNOWNasthekingofdogs.IwouldUSUALLYliedownonthefloorANDhewouldliedownBESIDEme.IfIlefttheroom,HEwouldcryuntilIreturned.Itdidn'tmatterWHETHERsomeoneelsewasinaroomwithhimornot.LittledidIknowthatIwasmakingSUCHahugeinvestmentinmylife

　　这只是在基于原文的基础之上进行的修改,如果需要改进篇章,你这段就全废了.这是小学生作文吗?

2020-12-01 05:52:06

侯薇

　　就是改语法之类的高中作业没做过这种题不会啊啊

2020-12-01 05:57:03

杜旭辉

　　估计是中国老师出的蹩脚中式思维的英语篇章。以上即是我的修改结果，修改的单词都用了大写标注了出来，请查收

2020-12-01 06:01:13

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