Goodafternoon,everyone.I’mSunJiayingfromJiahuiMiddleSchool.Todaymytopicisperseverance,thekeytosuccess.

　　August,24th,2005，thedateIcouldneverforget,itwasthedayIpassedmypianotest—level10.IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn’thelpmyselffromcheering,mytearsflooding,Itwasreallyachallengeforme,butIdidsucceed.

　　Istartedtoplaythepianowithcuriosityandenjoymentforapleasantbeginningbytheageoffour.ButIlostinterestwiththeharderpracticeandtheotherattractiveactivitiescame.

　　1Withthisattitude,IfailedLevel8.Irealizedhowimportantitwaswhenthetearsblurredmysight.Althoughit’sreallyafailureforme,eventuallyImademyfirstimportantdecision,KEEPON!

　　2Withthisattitude,IfailedLevel8.Althoughit’sreallyafailureforme,

　　Irealizedhowimportantitwaswhenthetearsblurredmysight,eventuallyImademyfirstimportantdecision,KEEPON!

　　Thatyear,Ipracticedwithmoreefforts,nocomplaint,Ipassedthelevel10withnoregret.

　　Napoleon/Itissaid:Victorybelongstothosemostpersevering.I’msoluckybecauseIpersistinmychoice!

　　Thankyou!

　　楼上那个文不对题是成功的

　　iloveswimming

　　iamnotthatkindofsportperson.ihavemanyinterests,butnotmanyforsports.ionlyenjoywatchingsports.

　　butitisadiffernetstoryforswimming.ihavebeengrowinglyinterestedinitrecently.

　　whatswimbringstomeisthefeelingoffreedom.ontheearth,thereareanimalsflying,swimming,andwalking.whiletheothertwogroupdenjoythreedimensionworld,thethirdgroupcanonlymoveatatwodimentionsurface.unfortunately,humanisamongthelastgroup.itisreallyhardforhumantofly;fortunately,wecanstillswim.

　　withinwater,theworldisexpandedfrom2dimensionto3.thatisthebeauty.

　　also,swimisnotastoughasrunning.bothrunningandswimmingarehealthysports.?running,tome,isakindofsuffer;whileswimmingisreallyapleasure.atleast,thatismypersonalfeeling.

　　so,iwillkeepmycurrentplan,swimthreedaysaweek,atleasthalfanhoureachtime.

　　Hello,everyone!

　　Doyoulikesport?Ilikeitverymuch!SometimesIliketodosomesportswithmyfriends.Youshoulddothesportmore,becauseitisverygoodforyourhealthy!Onyourfreetime,howaboutrunning?Ialwaysdoit!Whydon'tyouplaybasketballwithyourfriends?It'sveryinteresting!Ithinkso.Andwhydon'tyouplaysomegames,itcanrelaxtoyou!

　　Wouldyouliketodosomesportsandplaysomegameswithme?Welcometoyou!

　　That'sall.Thankyou!

　　绝对适合初二!!

　　因为我就是初二的，这是我自己写的!!!

　　Hello,everyone!

　　Doyoulikesport?Ilikeitverymuch!SometimesIliketodosomesportswithmyfriends.Youshoulddothesportmore,becauseitisverygoodforyourhealthy!Onyourfreetime,howaboutrunning?Ialwaysdoit!Whydon'tyouplaybasketballwithyourfriends?It'sveryinteresting!Ithinkso.Andwhydon'tyouplaysomegames,itcanrelaxtoyou!

　　withinwater,theworldisexpandedfrom2dimensionto3.thatisthebeauty.

　　also,swimisnotastoughasrunning.bothrunningandswimmingarehealthysports.?running,tome,isakindofsuffer;whileswimmingisreallyapleasure.atleast,thatismypersonalfeeling.

　　so,iwillkeepmycurrentplan,swimthreedaysaweek,atleasthalfanhoureachtime.