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　　文章有木有语法错误?WhenIrememberthatstory,Iwassohappy.Thissummerholiday,Iwentto文章有木有语法错误?WhenIrememberthatstory,Iwassohappy.Thissummerholiday,IwenttoDunhuangwithmyfather.IwenttovisittheMogao

　　文章有木有语法错误?WhenIrememberthatstory,Iwassohappy.Thissummerholiday,Iwentto

　　文章有木有语法错误?

　　WhenIrememberthatstory,Iwassohappy.

　　Thissummerholiday,IwenttoDunhuangwithmyfather.IwenttovisittheMogaoGrottoes,CrescentLake,MingshaMountainwhichwasveryamazingandbeautiful.Onedayatnoon,wewenttoeatwonton.Myfatherwentoutsideforawhile,butwhenhecame.'Whatismybowl'Myfathersurprised.Ilookedhe,andsmiledhappily.Thereasonwasfunny.Myfatherwentoutside,thewaitressfoundnoonenearthebowl.Soshecleanedthetable,andfelldownthewontonwhichmyfatherdidn'tfinish.

　　Howinterestingthetravelwas!

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2020-12-01 03:15

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刘钟鸣

　　好像有不少,文章也不大通顺.

　　Iwassohappy,是过去式,所以前面也应该过去式,whenirememberedthatstory;

　　Iwenttovisitthe.,后面总共跟了三个地方,是复数,所以应该是用whichwere;

　　"whatismybowl?",应该为“whereismybowl”,意思是我的碗哪里去了;

　　Ilookedhe,he应该用him,前面应该再加个at;

　　另外felldown这个词应该不大对,改成removed更贴切一些,

　　did't,我认为应该用hadn't.

　　个人见解,

2020-12-01 03:19:56

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