【大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文AStoryAboutTwentyYuanYesterday,myfathergavemetwentyyuan.Iwassohappytogotthemoney.ButbeforeIgotit.Myfathersaid:"Youreallywanttogotthemoney?"Isaidyes.Thenmyfatherthrowthemoney】
大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文
AStoryAboutTwentyYuan
Yesterday,myfathergavemetwentyyuan.Iwassohappytogotthemoney.ButbeforeIgotit.Myfathersaid:"Youreallywanttogotthemoney?"Isaidyes.Thenmyfatherthrowthemoneyonthefloor.Themoneybecamealittledirty."Nowdoyouwanttogotit?"Isaidyes.Myfathertrampledonthemoney.Themoneybecame
verydirty.Inthelast,Istillwanttogotthemoney.Becausethemoneydidnotloseitsvalue.Eventhoughitisverydirty.IthinkIhavelearnedsomethinginit.Whenwedidsomethingwrong.Wewillfeelwearestupid.Orwethinkweareworthless.But,althoughwearealwayslose.Asforgod,weareinvaluableassetsforever!