英语作文myfavourite____如题,填入生活有关的词语200词左右,比较口语化的朗读用的,楼下的那篇叶问写得不错，但是太长了，能不能缩短到250词左右？
英语作文myfavourite____
如题,填入生活有关的词语
200词左右,比较口语化的
朗读用的,
楼下的那篇叶问写得不错，但是太长了，能不能缩短到250词左右？
Myfavouritemovienameis"IPMAN".
ThestoryisaboutaChinesemanhowtodefeataJapanesegeneral.HisnameisYeWen.whenhewasyoung,hewasarichboy.HelikedKongfunamewasYongchunsomuch.HestudiedYongchuneveryday.Hepracticedhardlythatsomanyfightershavebeendefeatedbyhim.
In1937,JapanesearmyinvadedChina.Sodidhisfamily.Hebecamepoorandhelivedinasmallhouse.Hehadn'tgotenoughfoodtoeat.Soheneedajobcausehehadtotookcareofhisfamily.
Oneday,whenhewasworking.AJapaneseofficercametothefactoryandsaid"Iwanttofind10fighters.Mygeneralwillfightwithyou.Ifyouwin,you'llgetabagofrice!Whocomewithme?!"
Yewenknewifhewentwithhim,hewouldnotcameback.Hehadtotookcareofhisfamily.ButoneofhisbestfriendWuwentwiththeJapaneseofficer.Hewantedtodefeatthatgeneral.Althoughhetriedhisbest,hewasalsokilledbygeneral.Afewdayslater,Yewenstilldidnotseehisfriend,hewasworriedabouthim.WhenthatJapaneseofficercametofoundfightersagain.Yewenwentwithhimthatfoundhisfriend.Whenhearrivedthearena.Hesawmanyfighterswerekilled.Heunderstoodwhyhisfriendnotcameback.Hewassoanger.Inordertoavengehisfriend.Hestormedintothearenaanddefeated10Japanesefighters.Thegeneralwassurprised,hedecidedtodefeathiminfrontoftheChinesepeoplebyhisKarate.ForChinesedignityandhisfriend,heaccepted.Decisivebattleoftheday,somanyChinesepeoplecametowatchit.Finally,hedefeatedgeneral.
Thismovieisactionmovieandthetruestroyofthemoviecontent.Ilikethismoviebecausehero'snationalspirit.whenIsawthismovieIwaselectrify.Thatwassogreatmovie!
以上是小弟写的一篇作文,希望有大侠能帮我纠正错误,
favouritemovienameis"IPMAN".
ThestoryisabouthowaChinesemandefeataJapanesegeneral.HisnameisYeWen.whenhewasyoung,hewasarichboy.HelikedKongfunamedYongchunsomuch,hestudiedYongchuneveryday.Hepracticedveryhardthatmanyfighterswasdefeatedbyhim.
In1937,JapanesearmyinvadedChina.Sodidhisfamily.Hebecamepoorandlivedinasmallhouse.Hedidn'thaveenoughfoodtofeedhisfamilysohetookajobworkinginafactory.
Oneday,whenhewasworking.AJapaneseofficercametothefactoryandsaid"Iwanttofind10fighters.Mygeneralwillfightwithyou.Ifyouwin,you'llgetabagofrice!Whowouldcomewithme?!"
Yewenknewifhewentwithhim,hewouldnotcameback.Hehadtotookcareofhisfamily.ButoneofhisbestfriendWuwentwiththeJapaneseofficer.Hewantedtodefeatthatgeneral.Althoughhetriedhisbest,butstill,hewaskilledbygeneral.Yewenstartedtoworriedabouthimsincehehadn'tshownupforafewdays.WhenthatJapaneseofficercametofoundfightersagain.Yewenwentwithhimtofindhisfriend.Whenhearrivedthearena.Hesawmanyfighterswerekilled.Heunderstoodwhyhisfrienddidn'tcomeback.Hewassoangry.Inordertoavengehisfriend'sdeath.Hestormedintothearenaanddefeated10Japanesefighters.Thegeneralwassurprised,hedecidedtodefeathiminfrontoftheChinesepeoplebyKarate.ForChinesedignityandhisfriend,heaccepted.Whenthedaycame,somanyChinesecametowatch.Finally,hedefeatedthegeneral.
Thisisanactionmoviebasedonatruestory.Ilikeitbecauseofthehero'spatrioticspiritandtheperfecteditingwiththosesplendidfightscene.Iwasdeeplymovedandthereforeithasearned