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　　高手请找出我的语法错误,Themainpurposeofthestudentsistolearnusefulknowledgeandputthemintorealpractice.Hereisaquestion,whichlearningmethodisthemostefficientwayforastudent?Studyinginatraditionalclassroomfrom

　　高手请找出我的语法错误,

　　Themainpurposeofthestudentsistolearnusefulknowledgeandputthemintorealpractice.Hereisaquestion,whichlearningmethodisthemostefficientwayforastudent?Studyinginatraditionalclassroomfromteachersorlearnitbythemselves?Well,inmypointofview,Idefinitelywillchoosethefirstchoice.

　　First,teacherisaprofessionalpeoplewhohavesomuchteachingexperience,skills,and,ofcourse,themostimportantaspect--------professionalknowledge.Whenastudentarefacingsometoughquestionswhicharethemselvescannotunderstandwhywaswrong.Atthismoment,teachersnotjustcouldhelpyoutounderstandthosecertainsubjectquestions,suchascomefromMath,GeologyorEnglish.butalsopointsomeshortagesthatyoucouldneverfindthembyyourself.Ifastudentsfeelnervousduringtheexams,ofcoursedidnotdoitwell,andhavealowscore.Asaresult,thatstudentsmaythinkhimselfissostupidandmaybeevendonotwantstudyanymore.Atthismoment,ifapatientteachercansmoothhisnegativemoodbymeansofspeakingsoftbyheartandgivehimgreatconfidence,thenprobablythatstudentsmayconquerthisproblem.

　　Furthermore,ifstudentslearnknowledgebythemselvessometimestheyprobablycannotcatchthemainpointofknowledgeincertainsubject.Sincenomatterwhichsubjectthestudentchoose,Thereisvastresourceinthatsubject.Sometimes,whenstudentsgetintotheterritoryofknowledge,theyprobablygetlostonthewayoflearningknowledge.Ifthereisateacher,whohavesomanyteachingexperiencesforyearsandhaveefficienttactictohelphisorherstudentsidentifythemainusefulpoint,skippingthosedetailsfromamountofcertainknowledge.While,youcanimagine,thestudentscouldgotoanothernewheightthattheycouldnotseethembefore.

　　Inreality,Ishouldalsomentionthat,studentscannotmerelyrelyonteachersallthetime.Tobespecific,duringthevacationtime,ifstudentsfacesomeproblemsthatcannotfindsomehelpfromclassmatesorteacher,Whathecandoisusetheknowledgethathestudiedinschool,andfindsomerelatedmaterialsfromthelibraryorinternet.Inasense,maybethisisachancethatmakehimselftoexplorehisownpotential.

　　Inconclusion,Weshouldneverignoretheimpo

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　　1Studyinginatraditionalclassroomfromteachersorlearnitbythemselves?

　　前后应该对应一下吧,前面是动名词后面怎么成了learn了?

　　2Idefinitelywillchoosethefirstchoice

　　后面用choice不太好,一般不用chooseachoice吧?

　　3Whenastudentarefacingsometoughquestionswhicharethemselvescannotunderstandwhywaswrong.

　　astudent了后面怎么是are?

　　定从有点小问题,建议改为Whenastudentisfacingsometoughquestionswhichtheythemselvescan'tunderstand.

　　4teachersnotjustcouldhelpyoutounderstandthosecertainsubjectquestions,suchascomefromMath,GeologyorEnglish.butalsopointsomeshortagesthatyoucouldneverfindthem（去掉them)byyourself.

　　改为：teacherscannotonlyhelpyouunderstand...suchasmath(小写）butalsopointout(注意out)someshortagesthatyoucouldneverfindbyyourself.

　　5Ifastudentsfeelnervousduringtheexams,ofcoursedidnotdoitwell,andhavealowscore

　　students该为student(后面的也都改掉）ofcourse后改为hewon'tdoitwell

　　6Asaresult,thatstudents（去掉S）maythinkhimself（改为he)issostupidandmaybeevendo(doesn't)notwantstudyanymore.Atthismoment,ifapatientteachercansmoothhisnegativemoodbymeansofspeakingsoft(softly)byheartandgivehimgreatconfidence,thenprobablythatstudents(...)mayconquerthisproblem.

　　7Sincenomatterwhichsubjectthestudentchoose,Thereisvastresourceinthatsubject

　　把since该为because

　　Ifthereisateacher,whohave(has)somanyteachingexperiencesforyearsandhave(has)efficienttactictohelphisorherstudentsidentifythemainusefulpoint,skippingthosedetailsfromamountofcertainknowledge.While(however),youcanimagine,thestudentscouldgotoanothernewheightthattheycouldnotseethem(去掉them)before

　　Tobespecific,duringthevacationtime,ifstudentsfacesomeproblemsthat(加个they)cannotfindsome(去掉)helpfromclassmatesorteacher,Whathecandois(to)usetheknowledgethathestudied(learnt)inschool,andfindsomerelatedmaterialsfromthelibraryorinternet.Inasense,maybethisisachancethat(would)makehimselfto(去掉)explorehisownpotential.

　　Ofcourse,theprerequisite-------study（working/studying)hardmustbesatisfied.

　　我就当是做改错题啦,

2020-12-02 20:21:40

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