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  谢谢英语达人们修改下下面的作文作文水品不高,希望多多修改,不要留情啊~makingagoodimpressionMakeagoodimpressionNowadays,makingagoodimpressingattheemploymentisanimportantandessentialstepinsociety.Despite

  谢谢英语达人们修改下下面的作文

  作文水品不高,希望多多修改,不要留情啊~

  makingagoodimpression

  Makeagoodimpression

  Nowadays,makingagoodimpressingattheemploymentisanimportantandessentialstepinsociety.Despitethefactthatyouareamanofextraordinarytalents,itispossiblethatyoucannotacquireadesiredjob.Justbecauseyoudon’tknowhowtointerview,youmaylosealotofopportunities.Ittakesquickglancejustabouttwoorthreesecondsforsomeonetounderstandyouwhenyoumeetforthefirsttime.Yourbehaviorsandappearancemaytellotherswhattypeofthepersonyouare.Accordingly,whetheryoucanmakeagoodimpressionissignificantforustoformanadvantageousrecognitioninothers’mind.

  Firstofall,themostimportantthing,Ithink,isabeautifulandconfidentsmile.Asmilehascapabilityofshorteningthedistancebetweenyouandstrangerliketheemployer.Peoplewillconsideryouareafriendlyandwarm-heartedmanandaregladtotalkwithyou.

  Secondly,rightbodylanguageisalsonecessaryforus.Somepeoplehaveseveralbadhabits,whichispossibletobeseenbyothers.Itmaycauseamisunderstandingthatyouareanxietyandlookdownontheothers.Agentlyandpoliteactioncanpresentyouappropriatelywhenyouareintroducingyourselfandtalkingaboutyourpointofviews.

  Ofcourse,anumberofwayscanmakeagoodimpressiontoyou,suchasneatandtidydressing,politespeaking.However,inaword,thesincereandtrueattitudecanhelpyougetthebeliefofstranger.Themoreconfidentyouare,themorechanceforyoutoattain.

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  Whatkindofpersonreyou?Itseemsyouwantaveryformalcomposition,butthetopicdoesnotlooksoacademicorsophisticated.

  Makeagoodimpression

  Makingagoodimpressiononyourpotential/prospectiveemployerisveryessential.Despitethefactthatyouareamanofextraordinarytalents,itispossiblethatyoucannotacquireadesiredjob,justbecauseyoudon’tknowhowtobehaveproperataninterview.Aquickglance,justabouttwoorthreeseconds,isenoughforsomeonetoformanopinionofyouwhenheseesyouforthefirsttime.Yourbehaviorsandappearancemaytellotherswhattypeofthepersonyouare.Accordingly,yourabilitytoleaveagoodfirst-impressionmayhelpgreatlytobringanadvantageousrecognitioninothers’mind.

  Inordertoachievethis,themostimportantthing(最重要?那下面总结呢?真诚的态度?),Ithink,isabeautifulandconfidentsmile.Asmilehascapabilityofshorteningthedistancebetweenyouandsuchstrangerastheemployer.Peoplewillconsideryouafriendlyandwarm-heartedmanandaregladtotalkwithyou.

  Secondly,thecorrectbodylanguageisalsonecessary(forYOU).Whilesomebadhabits(什么?太抽象)maycausemisunderstanding,makingyouappearanxiousandarrogant,agentleandpoliteactioncanpresentyouappropriatelywhenyouareintroducingyourselfandtalkingaboutyourpointofviews.

  Ofcourse,anumberofwayscanhelpyouleaveagoodimpression(ONOTHERS),suchasneatandtidydressing,politespeaking.However(为什么转折),whatistrulyimportantisthesincereandtrueattitude,whichcanhelpyouwinthetrustofastranger.Themoreconfident(逻辑乱,confident----polite,gentle---sincere---confident到底什么重要)youare,themorechanceyoucanget.

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