有哪位大神帮我看看这篇英语的自我介绍呀~看看语法有没有什么错误之类了,先谢过了FirstIwanttotellyou,wecanlearntogether.Ifeelveryhappy.Asyoucansee,Iwasatransferstudent.AlthoughIfailinmyseniore

　　有哪位大神帮我看看这篇英语的自我介绍呀~

　　看看语法有没有什么错误之类了,先谢过了

　　FirstIwanttotellyou,wecanlearntogether.Ifeelveryhappy.Asyoucansee,Iwasatransferstudent.AlthoughIfailinmyseniorentranceexamination.Butthisdidnotbringmedown,I'mnotaloser.

　　Myteacheroncesaidtome:'whenyouhavechoices,choosethebest.whenyouhavenochoices,doyourbest.'

　　Ihavetodothebest.

　　Well,harkbacktothesubject.

　　I'maoutgoinggirl.IloveallthethingsIlike.Myfavoritecolorisgreen.Becauseitrepresentsnew.Also,Ilovemusic,especiallycountrymusic,soIlikeTaylorSwiftverymuch.

　　Finally,Iwantsay,Icanlosesufferabig.ButIwillstageacomeback.

　　Hopewecangetalonehappy.

　　Thankyouforlisteningtomyselfintroduction.