刚写的短文,英语达人帮忙检查一下错误!WhenIlivedinChina,Ihavestudiedoilpaintingfor2years.Iknowsomecharactersofoilpainting,suchasextremelystringentdrawings,decorativeandfullandrichcolors,andsmoothlinesofsym

　　刚写的短文,英语达人帮忙检查一下错误!

　　WhenIlivedinChina,Ihavestudiedoilpaintingfor2years.Iknowsomecharactersofoilpainting,suchasextremelystringentdrawings,decorativeandfullandrichcolors,andsmoothlinesofsymmetryofcomposition.ThosecharactersareallembodyinE.J.Hughespainting.

　　Ichoseonespecialpaintingfromhispaintings.Soletmeexplainwhythispictureisaspecialone.ThispicturedrewtheGabrielaIsland.Inallofhispaintingwhichissittingatthepictureshowinthedowntownbuilding.Mostofthepaintingshavehumancivilization.Forexample,somepictureshavechurchorship;somehavehighwayorfactory.Thispicturejustdrewnaturelandscapeandgaveexpressiontosymmetry.First,weputalinedownthemiddleofthepainting.Intheleftofthepaintingisanoceanandintherightofthepaintingisabeach.Sothissymmetryisoceantoland.Second,weputalineacrossonthemiddleofthepainting.Onthetopleftcorneristheskywhichcolorisblue.Onthelowerleftquarteristheoceanwhichcolorisblue.Sothetwopartsissymmetry.Onthetoprightcornerareforestandthelowerrightquarterisgrassplot.Whenweenjoythepicturewecanpayattentioninthesymmetry.

　　WhenIwasstudyingpainting,myteachershowedussomepaintings,like“TheStarryNight”and“CaféTerraceonthePlaceDuForum.”NowIalsoappreciatesomedifferentpainting.