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  请为这篇英语文章找出错误.谢Goodmorning,mynameisGeorge,itisreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunityforainterviewmyself.Nowiwillintroducemyselfbriefly,iam19yearsold,borninjilinprovince,northeastofchina.Iamst

  请为这篇英语文章找出错误.谢

  Goodmorning,mynameisGeorge,itisreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunityforainterviewmyself.

  Nowiwillintroducemyselfbriefly,iam19yearsold,borninjilinprovince,northeastofchina.Iamstudyinginthejilininstitueofarchitectureandcivilengineering.mymajorisxxx.IlikethismajorandIhavefullconfidenceinabrightfutureifonlyoureconomycankeepthegrowthpacestill.

  Ihavemanyhobby,Inmysparetime,Ilikeswimming,ping-pong,reading,andalsowithcomputergames.what'smore,Iamgoodatanalysis,soIliketoreadsomedetectivefiction,butmysparetimeisquitefewbeforeIgraduatefromthemiddleschool.Iamveryeasy-going,enjoyingagoodrelationshipamongmyclassmates.Igettheenergyfromthepersonaroundme.Butjustlikeeverycorinhastwosides.AtsometimesIprepareforsomething.Ijustwanttolivealone.Butthepeopleamongmemisunderstandme."What'shappenforyou?"theyalsoaskthat.

  Timerevealsallthings.youwillknowmebetterinthefurther.that'sall.

  如果不用“I”,我该将这个改成什么?能给于解决的话,我会在补上5分。

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  ainterviewmyself——改为aninterview去掉反身代词myselffullconfidence——改为fullofconfidencegrowthpacestill——still用词不当建议改为steadilyhobby——用复数hobbiesalsowithcomputergames——p...

2020-12-04 12:54:57

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