英语日记好心人帮忙改下.Lastmonth,itravelledtoQingYuanprovince,thiscityisverybeautiful.itisfamousforhotspringandraftingandhaveavariousofdeliciousfood.wewanttotakeariskfirstly.sowedecidedtogowaterrafting.wh

　　英语日记好心人帮忙改下.

　　Lastmonth,itravelledtoQingYuanprovince,thiscityisverybeautiful.itisfamousforhotspringandraftingandhaveavariousofdeliciousfood.

　　wewanttotakeariskfirstly.sowedecidedtogowaterrafting.whenwearrivedtothemostfamousraftingplacecalledXuanZhen,ithadhadalotofpeoplewaitedinline.Aftertenminutes,abustookustothetipmountain,itistheraftingsource.weputontheairjacketandothersafety.withexcitedmoodweweresetout.OH,itwassoirritative.ourraftrunveryfastandhittherockceaseless.theriverhasalotoffallandwhentheraftrusheddownthefall,wewerealmostgotintotheunderwater.ourclotheswerewetcompletely.butweweresohappy,cheeredloudly.inthemiddleoftheriver,therewasaflatwaterarea.ourraftgottogether.itwassofunny,somepeopleusedtheirhelmettofillwithwaterandfightedtheotherpeople.whataexcitingitwas.weallenjoythisfight.

　　afteronehour,wefinishedtheimposingtrip.

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