【一篇英语改错题I'msohappytoinformyouwhenwewillhaveapicnicinZhongshanParkthisSunday.Everyoneneedstaketwobottlesofwaterandadishwellpreparinginadvanceathome.Wewilgatherat8;00thisSundaymorningandstarttenminu】

　　一篇英语改错题

　　I'msohappytoinformyouwhenwewillhaveapicnicinZhongshanParkthisSunday.Everyoneneedstaketwobottlesofwaterandadishwellpreparinginadvanceathome.Wewilgatherat8;00thisSundaymorningandstarttenminutelater.Nolitterisallowedtheresothatweshouldn'ttaketoomuchfoodwithpackages.Anyonewhohavesomethingelsetodoshouldaskmonitorforaleave.We'llhaveahappyweekend.

　　一共有十处错误,请帮着改出来,我改出五处了.请帮着改,

　　有规律的：一句一处，标题有一处，我没打出来，还有九处分别是：第一行到havea,第二行到needs,第三行到preparingin,第四行到8：00，第五行到NO，第六行到too,第七行到something,第八行到we'llhave,第九行是ahappyweedend.还有九处错误，帮着改出来，