帮忙改一下这篇英语作文Everyonehastheirowndreams.Dreamisthestartofsuccess.Whenwehaveadream,theonlythingweshouldtodoismakeitcometure.Ihaveadream.Mydreamistobeacomputerprogrammer,whocancreatesoftwareorco

　　帮忙改一下这篇英语作文

　　Everyonehastheirowndreams.Dreamisthestartofsuccess.Whenwehaveadream,theonlythingweshouldtodoismakeitcometure.

　　Ihaveadream.Mydreamistobeacomputerprogrammer,whocancreatesoftwareorcomputergames.Ilikecomputer.WhenthefirsttimeImetcomputer,itattractedmeimmediately.Ofcourse,tobeagoodprogrammerisdifficult,butIthinkIcanmakeit.

　　NoweverythingIdoisclosetomydream.Ifeelmylifeisfillwithhopeandiscolorful,andIhaveenoughconfidencetorealizemydream.I’llworkhardformydreams,Iwillnevergiveup.

　　看看有没有什么语法问题