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　　帮忙看一下我写的小短文,看看有没问题.

　　Holleeveryone!Iamveryhappytointroducemyselfhere.Mynameisxxx.asyoucansee,iamagirl.I‘msixteenyearsold.Igraduatedfromno.5school.Ilikepiaybadminton.Butican'tpiayitwell.IalsolikewachTV、listentomusic.Ithinkimusttoworkhard.Lastbutnolist,ihopewecangetalonewell.That'sall.Thanksforyoulistening.