【自己写的英文自我介绍求修改请英语至少达到6级或专四同学回答注意:1.对句法语法拼写错误予以改正2.如果有贴切的口语表达请予以口语化的表达方式3.可以补充内容或者删】
自己写的英文自我介绍求修改
请英语至少达到6级或专四同学回答
注意:1.对句法语法拼写错误予以改正
2.如果有贴切的口语表达请予以口语化的表达方式
3.可以补充内容或者删减,使逻辑连贯
GoodmorningDearProfessors,Myname
isXXX,comefromTangshan.I'mgreathonoredtomeetyouhere.Last
year,IgraduatedfromlightindustrycollegeofHebeiuniteduniversity.After
mygraduation,IhavethoughtIreallyneedtogetaMaster'sdegree.Resolutely
myfatherrefused.So,IhadtogotapositionintheBeicheCorporationasabench
worker.Althoughtherehaveagoodincome,Ineverforgotmydreamandstarted
thewaytopursuemystudies,withoutresigned,withoutsupported.Thatdays,I
prayfornottoworkovertimeeverydayandalwaysstayuplate.Now,I'm
finallystandingbeforemyhonorableprofessor’s.Thankmyselfwhohasworked
sohardandthanksdeerProfessorswhogivemethischance.Thatisall,thank
you.
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