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  这是我写的英文,请帮我挑挑错或者提提意见Almosteverybodywantstobesuccessfulandasyouknow,tobesuccessfulsometimesisratherdifficult.Butthedistanceoffailureandsuccesscouldbealsoveryshort.Now,I’lltellyou

  这是我写的英文,请帮我挑挑错或者提提意见

  Almosteverybodywantstobesuccessfulandasyouknow,tobesuccessfulsometimesisratherdifficult.Butthedistanceoffailureandsuccesscouldbealsoveryshort.

  Now,I’lltellyouastorywhichIreadinamagazine.

  Therewasayoungmanwhowantedtofindagoodjob,sohesendhisresumetoacompany.Butunfortunately,hefailedinthefirstinterview.Elevenpeoplewasagreedtogoforthesecondinterview.Butthemanagernoticedthatthereweretwelvepeoplesittinginfrontofher.

  Canyouguesswhoistheunwantedmanfortheinterview?Yeah,itisrighttheyoungman!Sincehehadfailedthefirsttime,whydidhecomenow?Theyoungmansaid:Iwasn’treconciletotheresultandwantedtoknowinwhichaspectotherpeopledidbetterthanme.Iusedtoworkedfor18companieswithoutajob-hopping.ThereasonwhyIhadtochangejobsofrequentlywasthatallofthe18companiescloseddownonebyone.Iknownthereasonsofeveryfailedcompanyweretotallydifferent.SoIaccumulatedabundantexperience.Forexample,therealexaminerwastheagedmanagainstthedoorwhoservedtheteaforusjustnow.

  Itwassurprisingthattherealexamineradmittedtheyoungmanimmediatelyforhewonderedwhyhisdisguisefailed.So,yousee,sometimesitiseasytobesuccessfulfromfailure.

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2020-12-06 19:05
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黎毛欣

  1.Therewasayoungmanwhowantedtofindagoodjob,sohesendhisresumetoacompany.这里的send改为sent

  2.Elevenpeoplewasagreedtogoforthesecondinterview.这里应该用复数的,还有agree的用法这里好像怪怪的,改为required(要求)会好一点.

  3.Canyouguesswhoistheunwantedmanfortheinterview?这里应该用过去式was吧

  4.Iwasn’treconciletotheresult.这里的意思应该是不满意吧,应该改为ididn'tsatisfiedwiththeoutcome.

  5.wantedtoknowinwhichaspectotherpeopledidbetterthanme.这里which前面的in可省略

  6.Iusedtoworkedfor18companieswithoutajob-hopping.这里worked用完形.

  7.Iknownthereasonsofeveryfailedcompanyweretotallydifferent.这里的konwn改为过去式.大概这样了吧

2020-12-06 19:06:09

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