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  【我写了一篇英语作文,MyBestFriendIhavemanyfriend,amongthem,mybestfriendismymonitor-Tony.Helookslikeafamoussingerandheisalsoveryhandsome.Heisahard-workingstudent.Wearegoodatdifferentsubjectsonstudy.Sosometimes】

  我写了一篇英语作文,

  MyBestFriend

  Ihavemanyfriend,amongthem,mybestfriendismymonitor-Tony.Helookslikeafamoussingerandheisalsoveryhandsome.Heisahard-workingstudent.Wearegoodatdifferentsubjectsonstudy.Sosometimeswetalkovertheproblems.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothersandtryhisbesttohelptheclassmateswhenthey'reintrouble.Therefore,Ithinkofheisakindandhonestperson.IwithtokeepthefriendshipbetweenTonyandIforever.

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2020-12-06 21:03
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  Ihavemanyfriend中friend加s

  Heisalwaysreadytohelpothersandtryhisbesttohelptheclassmateswhenthey'reintrouble.中try应用三单,tries.

  Ithinkofheisakindandhonestperson.把of改为that

  IwithtokeepthefriendshipbetweenTonyandIforever.with改为wish

  另外把TonyandI改为tonyandme岂不更好?

  文中运用衔接词较好.若注意细节,你的文中应该会更成功!

2020-12-06 21:04:46

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