【求改错,自己写的老师英文推荐信ItakegreatpleasureinrecommendingMr.AoYang,myformerstudent,foradmissionintoyourdistinguishedpostgraduateprogram.IgottoknowhimwhenhetookmyOperatingSystemcourse.Atfirst,Mr.Ao’】
求改错,自己写的老师英文推荐信
ItakegreatpleasureinrecommendingMr.AoYang,myformerstudent,foradmissionintoyourdistinguishedpostgraduateprogram.IgottoknowhimwhenhetookmyOperatingSystemcourse.
Atfirst,Mr.Ao’sordinaryappearancedidnotcatchmuchofmyattention.Later,Igraduallyfoundthathewasintelligent,beingabletoraisethequestionsthatotherstudentscouldnotreach.Moreover,heoftenhadpersonaltalkswithmeaboutthecutting-edgetechnologiesinthenetworkfield.Hisenthusiasmonthestudyofcomputernetworksandbreadthoftherelevantknowledgegavemedeepimpressions.
Mr.Aoisaninitiativeandconscientiousstudent,seekingself-improvementconstantly.Hehadpersonaltalkswithmeseveraltimes,IfoundsheindicatedagreatinterestinJapaneselanguageandliterature.
InChinanowadays,computerandnetworktechnologiesarerelativelyfallingbehindincomparisonwiththewesterncountries.SoIpersonallyverymuchsupportMr.Lintofurtherhisstudyandrefinehisskillsinyourinstitution.AndIamsurethatitwillbetremendouslyhelpfultohisfuturecareer.Irecommendhimwithoutanyreservation.Ifyouwanttoknowmoreabouthim,pleasedonothesitatetocontactwithme.
是不是会有点少啊?可以帮我改进补充一下吗?学的是计算机,申请的也是计算机~谢谢了~